Audience Feedback

For my audience feedback, I posted my magazine front cover on Twitter to get a response. I found that my Jake Bugg coverline to be 'clever' and the writing is bold and readable. I was told something I could improve on for my front cover would be the white in the background, as it is very clear and could be filled in with more writing.

Here is a Windows Movie Maker of me asking questions to an audience member, what she likes about my contents page/dps, and what I could improve.